Here's three great pieces of writing from Week 1
Cleaning My House
by Rachel
I am flooding my house with milk because my house is really, really dirty.
My Haircut
by Mia
I was in my house. My mum cut my own hair and I can’t breathe because the hair goes up my nose so I wiggle!
Climbing the Volcano
By Gemma
Me and mum are climbing an extinct volcano. I am scared but mum says,
“It’s ok, I’ll help you”
And she towed me to the top with a big rope.
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